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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17699
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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文中从句使用不丰富,要注意个别句子错误;文中能较恰当地使用高级词汇,但存在较多拼写错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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The curve line shows the details regarding the consumption of fish and other kinds of meat per person per week in a European country during 25 years since 1979. Over the span of 25 years. the consumption for chicken , beef , and fish shows a different trend . In1979, beef has become the largest meat consumption , whhich occupys about 22o grams per person per week , appromately 150 gramps in lamb , 140 gramps in chicken and 60 gramps in fish. A dramatical decline in beef consumption can be seen , which falling swifyly from 220 gramps to 100 gramps , between 1979 and 2004. By contrast the consumption for chicken shows an oppsite trend . it experiences a significant increase , rising from 140 gramps in 1974 to 250 gramps in 2004. Similarly, the consumption for lamb and beef shares a similar flucutuation. and the consumption for lamb falls sharply form 150 gramps in 1979 to 60 gramps in 2004. Surprisely, the consumption for fish remains costant at 50 gramps over the period of 25 years form 1974. In conclusion , as is shown in the curve line, chicken has become one of the most vital meat in our table , which has substitued other meats such as beef , lamb and fish.

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