七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句数量不足；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误。

sam got up in six yesterday, and then went to park by bickcle. he play very well in the parck. he and his parents had lunch in McDonald's. sam went to play bastetball from four to six in afternoon. after dinner, sam went for a walk. his father bought a classes musicue CD. How a funny day for sam.