正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Sam got up in sis yesterday. Then he went to the park by bicycle. He played very well in the park. He and his parents had lunch in McDonald's. Sam went to play basketball from four to six in afternoon. Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner. His father bought a class of music CD. what's a funny day for sam.