单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam got up in sis yesterday, and then he went to the park by bicycle. He played very well in the park. Sequenctly, he and his parents had lunch in McDonald's. Sam went to play basketball from four to six in afternoon. Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner. His father bought a class of music CD. what's a funny day for sam.