正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam got up at six yesterday morning. Afther that, he rode a bike to the park. He had great funny playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, sam played basketball from four to six with classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!