但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Yesterday Sam got up at six o'clock,then he went to the park by bike.He had a good time in the park.At noon he had lunch with his parents.He played basketball with his schoolmates from four to six at the afternoon.After dinner Sam went for a walk with his father.Father bought a CD which contains classical music for him.What a interesting day for Sam!