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Yesterday morning, Sam got up at six o'clock. Then he went to the park by bike, There is a amusement park inside the garden. He had hiking surround the hill, He hired a boat and went canoeing on the lake, too. He had a good time in the park. He wanted to climb and sailing on the lake, too, But he had no enough time, he must go to the down to meet his parents. At noon, Sam had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. He eat a big humburg and a glass of coca cola. How delicious the lunch is. At afternoon, Sam went to play basketball with his classmate at their school. They has played ball from four o'clock to six o'clock. After supper, San with his father went for a walk in the community, His father bought a CD for him. Sam was very happy.
