小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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Thers is a dog in my familiy. It's name is Dudu. It's nine years old. My father brought it in my family nine years ago. It makes our very happy. Now, it is very fat, so it doesn't like move. It is often sleep in my house everyday. It wears a red coat. My father, mother and I like it.