小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. Its name is Dudu. It's nine years old. My father brought it in my family nine years ago. It makes our very happy. Now, it is very fat, so it doesn't like move. It often sleeps in my house every day. It wears a red coat. My father, mother and I like it.