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Today is Sunday. And I have a rest. But I get up at 7 o'clock. I have breakfast at 7:30. Then I do my homework until noon. After lunch, I help my mother do housework. My classmate come to my home and will play tabletennis with me during housework. At 16:00, I go to gymsuim and play tabletennis with my classmate. He play very well, but I win him at last. I went to home in evening. After supper, I have watch TV until 21 o'clock. Today, I'm very busy and very tired.