一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Today is Sunday. And I have a rest. But I get up at 7 o'clock. I have breakfast at 7:30. Then I do my homework until noon. After lunch, I help my mother do housework. My classmate come to my home and will play table tennis with me during housework. At 16:00, I go to gymnasium and play table tennis with my pupil. He plays very well, but I win him at last. I went home in the evening. After supper, I have watch TV from19 o'clock to 21 o'clock. Today, I'm very busy and very tired.