小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There are lots of photo in my room, but only one photo is very important for me. The photo is a Jim's family. Jim's family has three people, Jim's father, mother and Jim. Jim's father is an engineer. He works in a famous factory. He is very tall and thin. He wares a white coat, blue trousers and browen shoes. He is in the left of the photo. Jim's mother is nurse. She is very busy and always has worked until night. She save lots of life. She is very beautiful. She is in the right of the photo. She wares a red skirt. Jim is in the middle of the photo. He studies at school and is my pupil. He wares a suit of sportware.