初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

作者词汇基本功很好，但高级词汇的使用还需加强；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误。

Eyes are the basic of human beings' activities.You are not able to do anything without eyes.Expect for some blind people who have been trained by schools.A larger sum of students in China do not know how to protect their eyes.Before entering the high school,they have already taken a glasses on eyes.Most of students are reading near the books in a short distance even if they could see in sight.In Chian,however,a great number of parents fail to pay any attention this sistuation.The fanstainc promble was found so hard that many students missed to protect their eyes' oppotunity as they was a child.At present,it is now more important to everyone not even students and the eyes are be more and more careful than ever anytime.What should you do,the following steps are able to tell you.You had better not make your eyes much too tired.They need to have a good rest just like your body.Going out to relax is most important.You must sometimes see some green plants.As we all known,the green color is useful.Above all,that's all my suggestion.On the other hand,protecting eyes should be doing in our life.Because our daily life depends on them.