初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

Eyes are the basic of human beings' activities. You are not able to do anything without eyes.Expect for some blind people who have been trained by schools.A larger sum of students in China do not know how to protect their eyes.Before entering the high school,they have already taken a pair of glasses on eyes.Most of students are reading near the books in a short distance even if they could see in sight.In China,however,a great number of parents fail to pay any attention this situation.The fantastic problem was found so hard that many students missed to protect their eyes' opportunity as they was a child.At present,it is now more important to everyone not even students and the eyes are more and more careful than ever anytime.What should you do,the following steps are able to tell you.You had better not make your eyes much too tired.They need to have a good rest just like your body.Going out to relax is most important.You must sometimes see some green plants. Above all,that's all my suggestion.On the other hand,protecting eyes should be doing in our life.Because our daily life depends on them.