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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；文中从句过少；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。
Tom is a good boy. He gets up at six o'clock and goes to school at 6:15 every day. He is always eat in home and doen't outside. During the school, he never listen to music and watch TV. When he was off the school he arrived home at nine twenty. That's one day for Tom.
