正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Our Monitor is John. He is 14 years old. He is tall with black short hair. He likes to wear white T-shirts. He likes white and green colors. His hobby is playing basketball on the weekends. He also likes to tell stories. He is a funny boy. We all like him very much.