作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Our Monitor is John. He is 14 years old. He is tall with black short hair. He likes to wear white T-shirts. He likes white and green colors. His hobby is playing basketball on the weekends. He also likes to tell stories. He is a funny boy and likes to help other classmates. We all like him very much.