文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;从句使用量太少;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Tom is a good child because he has strict regular rules. He always get up at 6:00. After that ,he goes to school at 6:15. He never eat outside and listen to music on school days. Of course, he does not watch TV on school nights. He is always back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. That's all.