文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Tom is a good child because he has strict rules. He gets up at 6:00. After that,he goes to school at 6:15. He never eats outside and listens to music on school days. Of course, he does not watch TV on school nights. He is always back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. That's all.