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Tom is a good child because he has strict rules. He gets up at 6:00 every morning. After that, it is too early to be late that he goes to school at 6:15. He never eats lunch or dinner outside and he often listen to music on holidays instead of school days. Of course, he does not watch TV on school nights. He is always back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. That's all.