小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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We lived in downtown. I have a big beautiful garden. My house is in the center of the garden. My house is two floors. The first floor is living room and kitchen. There are many of funiture in my livingroom, such as TV, sofa, table and chair. My father, mother and I always watch TV in the livingroom at night. The kitchen is very small. My mother cook in it. The scend floor in bedroom. We have two bedrooms. One is my father's and mother's, the other is mine. The garden is around the house. There are many trees and flowers in my garden. It is very beautiful in the spring. At the night of Summer, we sit under the tree and singing and dancing.