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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第20篇:了解想法是否比了解事实真相更重要

发布时间:2013-08-12 17:34浏览次数:890
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is more important to understand ideas and concepts than to learn facts.

了解想法是否比了解事实真相更重要。不同的人持有不同的观点。

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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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Some of my friends are concerned only about learning facts so much that they know thousands of them. However, I believe that it is more important to understand ideas and concepts for a variety of reasons. Students need understand the big picture before they can begin to concentrate on the details. Merely knowing the details is not the same as understanding why or how something happened. For example, my history teacher often makes sure that we understand the broad, historical situation of and event before filling our minds with a variety of facts. Without his broad knowledge, we would not be able to possess a deeper understanding of certain events. Many universities are now focusing on teaching students the value of ideas and concepts. Without understanding them, a student's grades will truly suffer. My sister told me that many of her university classes are seminars or classes based on discussion. In these classes, the professor and students discuss the ideas and theories behind what they are studying. The students are not expected to memorize lists of facts. They instead need to know the importance of what they are studying. Finally, creativity does not come from the mere knowledge of facts. Thinking in terms of broad concepts and ideas is what helps a person to become more creative. In the 1990s, Apple Computer went into a serious decline when its founder, Steve Jobs, was pushed out of the company. His return several years later, however, revitalized the company, and Jobs has been the driving force behind many of the company's innovative electronic products. Steve Job's abilities to be creative and to think in broad concepts have made his company one of the top ones in the world. His focus on ideas and concepts was what enabled Apple to become this way. Ultimately, the ability to learn ideas and concepts is crucial to having a broader understanding of things, to do better in school, and to develop new ideas of one's own. Knowing facts, while nice, is not as important as knowing the ideas behind them. I definitely see the use of understanding various ideas and concepts. However, learning facts is of much greater importance to people than knowing about ideas and concepts. Because schools place and emphasis on learning facts, students must do so in order to do well at school. A comprehensive knowledge of facts will enable students to pass their exams and get high grades, thereby improving their futures. My chemistry teacher is constantly having us memorize the characteristics of the different elements. We have to repeat these facts on our tests, or else we will do poorly. Knowing the concepts in my classes is much less crucial than being able to repeat facts. Knowing facts is of much greater importance than understanding ideas and concepts in the working world. Possessing knowledge of lots of facts is therefore one way for people to excel at their jobs. My aunt works at a large company, and she is constantly attending meeting where she has to talk about different products. She knows everything there is to know about them, and she can discuss the products without using any notes at these meetings. Her comprehensive knowledge has impressed her bosses, who recently gave her a promotion for her outstanding work. Clearly, knowing a lot of facts on the job can be of tremendous help. A person who has and encyclopedic knowledge of various topics will be respected and admired by many people. Possessing a lot of factual knowledge can help one impress people, which can work to a person's advantage. Some people refer to my cousin as a “walking encyclopedia.” Whenever people want to know the answer to a question on virtually any topic, he always seems to know the answer. He has won many trivia contests and even runs a successful tutoring business. Learning facts can help a person lead a very successful life. In conclusion, people should focus on improving their factual knowledge as it can help them in school, at their jobs, and in their lives in general. A complete understanding of ideas and concepts is fine, but more emphasis should be placed on learning facts.

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