初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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How to protect our eyes? Many people have wear glasses , they don't know how to protect their eyes. Everyday ,we use computer to learn something which is useful for us, and we watch TV to get the news . But we do not focse on our eyes which is very important for us . We should limit the time how long will we use the computer and watch TV， and we should go out to find some activities and other things . That would be good for protecting our eyes.