作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章层次较为清晰。
The monitor in our class, who named Li Ming and at the ages of fourteen, are a adorable boy we all show fancy to. With a short hair, delicate nose and star-like eyes, he always wears a plain T-shirt in black color as well as a blue pant. "Study hard and play with ease" is one of his desirable mottos. What a sincere and lovely boy he is!