2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

When I was a little girl, my hometown was simple and peaceful, in which there were no high buildings, cars and machines. Almost people in my hometown were farmers, who lived on planting. For children, there were no such plentiful tools, but we could do everything that came from the nature such as catching fishes in the river, climbing hills, taking fruits from the trees and so on. By now, my hometown changes a lot and becomes more and more beautiful. When I walk into the village, I can see a place like a park, where you can walk around the lake, do exercises in front of the house. People no longer just live on planting, and they can make money from various ways. Children now have various tools and more places to play. Unlike others places where may be in trouble with pollution, my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I hope it will be better in the future.