2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；从句数量偏少；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

The internet makes our life more convenient, we chat with other people easily on the internet, we can get more information from the internet, and we can buy goods from everywhere in the world through the internet. Just like the meaning in the picture, the internet gathered us, made us contact easier no wether where we live. However, this way of life makes us more separated.We do nearly everything just in front of a computer or a smartphone in our house, we don't need to go out for anything, and this just lead out a result that maybe we won't go out to meet our friends for a long time, we even don't go outdoor and just breathe the fresh air. So does the improve of the internet make us be closer and be farther? In my opinion, we need use the convenience the internet bring to us, just like E-mail,twitter,we chat and so on,we use this to get the latest information and communicate with other people. But our life doesn't bases on it, we still need to go out and meet our friends, play together or shop together, we still need heath so we still need some outdoor exercise. The internet is a tool, it's a part of our life but not full of it.