2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；适当增加高级词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多。

This picture is very interesting, it shows the role of the network in our modern life. With the rapid development of the network, people's work and lifestyle have changed a lot. It bring great convenience to us, for example, we need not to send paper letters to our friends anymore, whick usually needed at least a few weeks in the past way, however an e-mail can be received in a few minutes today. How easy the communications are! Another example, people can buy almost everything at home instead of going to a physical store. Just as a coin has two sides, the network has also maked the off-line contact between friends less, and the exercise together with friends less. Some people get weaked in their expression ability, such as keep silent or keep looking at their phones in party, while they are very talkative in the network. In my opinion we can not live without network today, because the development of the world is closely related to network. But the government, schools and families should also tell everyone to use network reasonablly and enjoy off-line lives.