但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Many teachers had taught me, but Miss Li was my favourite teacher. I studied in the No.6 Middle School 15 yeas ago. At that time, she taught English. She was 20's old and very beautiful. Her English was very good. At that time, I was bad grade and wasn't intreseted in English. After school, she asked me to her officer and taught me English. At first, she taught me vocabulary. Then, I studied grammar and listening. My English level had made progess under her help. At last, I passed the English examnation and went to the university that I liked.