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小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:40浏览次数:2401
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用英文描述下你最喜欢的老师.字数在100字以内
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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Many teachers had taught me, but Miss Li was my favourite teacher. I studied in the No.6 Middle School in 15 yeas ago. At that time, she taught English. She was 20's old and very beautiful. Her English was very good. At that time, I was bad grade and wasn't interested in English. After school, she asked me to her officer and taught me English. At first, she taught me vocabulary. Then, I learned grammar and listening. My English level had made progess under her help. At last, I passed the English examination and went to the university that I liked.

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