2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

Look at the picture,The Internet likes a net where people seem to live neighborhood. Internet makes our life convenient, with which people can contact friends more easier, even though who are at aboard, with which we can buy everything without going to the supermarket or shops, with which we can work in high efficiency and so on. On the one hand, Internet brings many good things, on the other hand, there is also bad things. Do you remember how many times you have gone home to see you parents last year? Do you remember how often you have a date with your friends face to face? You will find that most of your communications lies on Internet such as computer, or phones. Is it good or bad for Internet, there are all kinds of opinions. In my opinion, I hope people don't use Internet much. In the weekend, we can go out for a walk with our family or friends instead of sitting in front of the computer. But people also should make use of Internet for the necessary work.