2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者词汇表达较丰富多样，高级词汇使用较熟练；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

The picture vividly express that many people sitting in the narrow room before their computers.The people don't communicate with each other face to face but by interact on the internet. The picture seems to say people surfing online ignore the proximity of others. Internet, which is the most important technology in the 21st century. It gives people a new way to acquire information instead of traditional pattern.people can find their friends or favourite things online so they pay less attetion to their friends, families or lovers in the real world.people also dcrease the frequency of going out and doing sports. As a consequence, people will be less healthy and lose themselves in the friendship, family or love. Every coins has two sides, people can do everything easily online and the network can transport the willing and wish to the service provider.Then the service provider can give people what they want rapidly. All in all, Internet is both helpful and harmful to people. what Internet bring to you according to the way you use it.