2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

The picture vividly expresses that many people sitting in the narrow room before their computers. The people don't communicate with each other face to face but by interact on the internet. The picture seems to say that people surfing online ignore the proximity of others. Internet, which is the most important technology in the 21st century. It gives people a new way to acquire information instead of traditional pattern.People can find their friends or favourite things online so they pay less attetion to their friends, families or lovers in the real world.People also decrease the frequency of going out and doing sports. As a consequence, people will be less healthy and lose themselves in the friendship, family or love. Every coins has two sides, people can do everything easily online and the network can transport the willing and wish to the service provider.Then the service provider can give people what they want rapidly. All in all, Internet is both helpful and harmful to people. What Internet brings to you according to the way you use it.