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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park, he had a good time in the park. At noon, he had lunch together with his parents in McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates, it's relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical music CD for him, he good at singing, he like calssical music. It is a funny day Sam had!
