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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. After that, he went to the park by bike, he had a good time in the park. At noon, he had lunch together with his parents in McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates, it's relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical music CD for him, he good at singing, he likes classical music. It is a funny day Sam had!
