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文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。
lang lang is a man who love music very much. he was broned in1982 in shenyang china. he learned to play the piano for his three years old. in fourteen year old ,he came to America for study music. lang lang gave concerts all parts of the world and perfored music with many of famous musician. he has won a lot of prize. I have never seen his performance ,
