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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。
Happiness makes people feel powerful. When a person is in trouble, at the first feeling, he will be very upset, worried or disappointed, which has nothing help to solve the problem. But, once you make you best try to be happy, you will calm down, and the thought is very clear. Finally, you will find the answer for the trouble. happiness makes people be more beautiful. When a person is in the state of happiness, he or she will smile, and the eyes are all smiling. Even though a person looks ugly apparently, he/she is very beautiful yet while he/she is happy. happiness makes people be richer. Thinking about one condition, when a person are making a deal with you, but you now may be very angry, and the voice sounds very loud, what will the person who you are making deal with feel at that case? It's sure that the person will be unhappy, and the deal will be lost. In contrast, if you make a happy atmosphere, the person will be very satisfied to do the deal with you. In a word, Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.
