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请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写做的很好；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Honorable judges , fellow students.My name is Song Haiqiu ,a junior majoring in secretary.It is my honor to stand here to make you a speech.My topic is "Believe and beyond yourself". As a famous saying goes"Attitude is altitude".It is our attitude decides whether we can do what we want to do. There are many celebrities can prove that, such as Beethoven, a deaf musician.Stephen Hawking, a paralyzed physicist. But who I am going to introduce is a 80-post director,named 姚婷婷.I bet most of you heard about a TV serial "Fleet of time" whose Chinese name is "匆匆那年“.She is the one who directed it. Her way to a director is extremely tough. Almost nobody supported her. Her parents forced her to give up and even her teacher told her that she had no gift for it.However,she fought with all those doubts and negative from others.She resolved to follow her dream .After 7 years ‘ efforts, she got recognition for the short films she made,end up with a professional director. Her another film "Yesterday once more" whose Chinese name is “匆匆那年” was released today.What I learnt from her is her determined attitude to dream. Last year,I competed in the 5th Library Cup Guangdong English Online Speaking Contest.I resolved to enter into Top 120 among 5000 competitors.I didn’t remember how many times I failed.But every time I failed,I keep reminding myself to carry on…Finally I made it,becoming the only one who entered into the Top 120 in our school.I am proud of myself for my strong belief and preserving attitude. Indeed, attitude is altitude.As kobe Brain said,”Keep fighting and one day something good will happen!”Thanks for your listening.
