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Every person's life will be faced with all kinds of problems, even if it's a life which is surrounded by happiness. For example, when you are lucky in the lottery, you will suddenly become very rich in that case. Do you fell happiness? Of course yes! But then you have to face a lot of problems which the money bring to you. Such as your relatives and friends come to borrow money from you. Do you want to borrow them? By how much? Is that fair? And how to manage your money are all new problems. If these are not fixed well, you will be even more upset than before. Happiness doesn't mean you will not meet problems at all, but you have no fear when these problems arrive. When you face it, you need to know how to handle it. Finding a balance between stress and motivation means that you will gain a sense of accomplishment, and your ability will also be improved. This is the key to obtain happiness and even protect the happiness forever. So happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. That is my point of view.
