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Just as the essay says that the world does not lack beauty but the eyes to find it. Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.If your do not face trouble all the way you grow up, your life will be pale. however, if you fell into trouble and work out a solution for it. you feeling wll be wonderful and your life takes off really. most successful person have a hard history. For example, Liang Zhuge lost his parents when he was very young. Then Liang study and farm hard and become a very famous politician. all in all happyness is not your environmnt but your attitude and action.
