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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。
Just as the essay says that the world does not lack beauty but the eyes to find it. Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.If your do not face trouble all the way you grow up, your life will be pale. However, if you fall into trouble and work out a solution for it. You feeling will be wonderful and your life takes off really. Every successful person has a hard history. For example, Liang Zhuge lost his parents when he was very young. Then Liang study and farm hard and become a very famous politician. All in all happiness is not your environment but your attitude and action.Happiness is accompanied by sorrow, and it would turn sunny after rain as well. If rain remains after rain and sorrow remains after sorrow, please take those farewells easy, and turn to smilingly look for yourself who is never to appear.
