小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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When I grow up, I tend to be a photographer, a professional travel photographer. When I just was a child, I was extremely interested in great scene on TV shows, and I consider it is very cool who to be a photographer. Then I have a dream in deep that is to be a professional photographer in true life. I got my first camera when I was eighteen years old, It is not too early but propose. I was just stay up all that night, because I am exciting about that. I take it with me at everywhere, and take photos at any moment. During my college time, I got my first DSLR named Canon 550D. I learned many professional knowledge and technology by myself from our library and Internet. And I usually practice with my friends. At the same time, I am fond of traveling here and there. Now, I went to some place for taking magnificent photography. That is my dream come true gradually.