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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Communication is important to everybody because all of us need to explain our demands to others, which will make a mistake without communication. At home, when you are hungry, tired or have other needs, you should tell your family members, or they don't know anything. At the end, your needs will not be satisfied and you are still very hungry or tired. In work, if your leader gives you a mission, but you have enough time to finish it. What should you do immediately? That is right that you should communicate with your leader to tell him what your troubles are and what helps you want. I promise that your leader will help you to finish the mission in time. On the oppose, without communication, the result will be very serious. Outside, when you are old and you need somebody to help you, you also should tell other and get the help in time. In a word, communication is very important, all of us should learn how to communicate with others which helps you get many helps.

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