题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
As we know that humans are social animals, it becauses we cannot fight alone like tigers, but to live together like lions.Especially in the modern life. We not only need to say the things which we thinking about to express our opinions, but also need to listen to others about their attitudes, and discussing is necessary when conflicts occur during the talking. These are all called communication. It exists in our lives everytime and everywhere. We should be mates which are good at communication in teams, but not be loners. The former is what we need today, that is my point of view.