简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;结构良好,但是语言不流畅。
When I grow up,i want to be an engineer. I will build a big house and a small house for my father and mother. I will live with them. There will be a garden and a playground there. There will be many flowers and fruit trees in my garden. We will grow grass on the playground .