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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then wnet to park by bike, he was very happy. At noon, he and his parents ate lunch at Mc Donald. In afternoon, Sam and his schoolmates played basketball, from four PM till six. After supper, Sam and his father went for a walk. Fahter bought a classic CD to him. What a funny day for Sam!