2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,computers are widely used everywhere. Some people hold the view that computer brings enormous change to our daily lives.Firstly,it makes communication faster and more convenient.Secondly,it helps us get the information quicker.What's more,we can make friends from all over the world by chatting on the internet,we can also share happiness with each other. However,others don't think so,they think computer has more disadvantages than advantages,criminal rate is increasing,many people,especially students,are addicted to computer games,which does great harm to their study. As far as I'm concerned,everything has two coins,it's undoubtedly that computer makes everything easier,but it also takes a toll if someone use it inappropriately.