作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;从句使用量稍显不足;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词。
Yesterday morning Sam got up at six o'clock.then he went to the park by bike and had too much fun playing.At noon,he enjoyed lunch at McDonald's with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates from 16:00pm till 18:00pm in school.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father together in a shopping mall where his father bought a classical music CD for him,what a great day Sam had !as he got the precious gift and enjoys music very much on that day.