七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词。

What a great day Sam had! Yesterday morning Sam got up at six o'clock. Then he went to the park by bike and enjoyed a pleasant journey in the park. At noon when he had lunch at McDonald's with his parents and told his parents he had invited his classmates to play basketball from 16:00pm till 18:00pm in the afternoon. His parents had been waiting for him to have dinner when Sam arrived at home. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father together at the pedestrian street where his father bought a classical music CD for him. For that, he spent a happy day.