作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富。
What a great day Sam had! After Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning, he went to the park with a bike and had a great fun playing in the park, it is near McDonal's where his parents enjoyed lunch with Sam who told them he had invited his classmates to play basketball from 16:00pm till 18:00pm in school. Sam, after dinner, went for a walk with his father together in a pedestrian street where his father bought a classical music CD for him, for that, Sam had glad day!