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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
Pen Pal Wanted Hello, everybody! Lucy King, 13, comes from the UK, her favorite hobbies are sports, music and movies. Now Lucy wants to make a Chinese pen pal friend because she bloody loves China and knows more about it. She wants to be found a Chinese girl who is as same as Lucy's hobbies, and studies Chinese from the pen pal friend.
可可英语 - 划词释义
